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A2.4
Production Proposal
Risk assessment
Location recces
Updated storyboard
1st teens studying shot, High shot, MLS or LS, still movement
2nd friendship shot, Eye level shot, LS size, still movement
3rd calendar dates shot shot, MLS, Eye level angle, still movement
4th KIDS text shot, Eye level, LS size, still movement
5th kids shot, Eye level, either MLS or LS, still movement
6th studying shot, MLS or MCU, High level angle, still movement
1st adult office shot, shot size: eye level, MS, still movement
2nd hospitality shot, High level shot, LS size, still movement
3rd barista shot, MLS, Eye level angle, still movement
4th teacher shot, Eye level, LS size, still movement
5th bus stop shot, Eye level, either MLS or LS, still movement
6th teens shot, LS, Low level angle, still movement
Final documentary
The feedback highlights that your video is visually strong and engaging, with cinematic camera work, creative angles, and well-paced editing that effectively matches the voiceover and creates a compelling documentary-style feel. Viewers particularly liked the use of music, subtitles, and the overall production quality, noting that the captions helped with understanding and the shots added energy and interest. However, the main area for improvement is the audio balance, as the music is often too loud and overpowers the voiceover, making it difficult to hear what is being said. Additionally, some viewers mentioned that the on-screen text could be clearer and easier to read, and that certain themes, such as hustle culture, could be developed more consistently throughout the narrative to strengthen the overall message.
This was the feedback for my old draft. Unfortunately, while i was editing this draft I had deleted some footage unknowingly and then therefore had the whole project ruined which led me to re-doing it all over again.
At the same time, I had not been on my A game when it came to my A2.4 because of the conflict that has been going on. As a result, I haven't been able to dedicate as much as time and energy as i originally intended to. Despite this, i still made an effort to rebuild my project from scratch and apply the feedback i had received as best as i could. While i know this version may not reflect what i had wanted + the feedback. Through this evaluation I realized that i had also missed the final video pitch that i wanted to do.
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